CANDIDATE 1
Wednesday
8th October, 2014 Animal Farm and Watership Down Questions
How is tension built in chapter one
of ‘Watership Down’?
If we look
past the idyllic setting described by Richard Adams in chapter one of
‘Watership Down’, we can see that all is not right, and that tension is building
in the warren.
Immediately,
the reader is notified of the end of a particularly beautiful time of the year,
as ‘The primroses were over’. This short, blunt sentence suggests that not only
has beauty come to an end, but that something awful has begun. A sense of
tension and foreboding is created, as we don’t know what will happen in the
future for these rabbits. Although this is followed by a calm, pastoral
passage, with a ‘blackbird singing’ and ‘rabbits looking for dandelions’, there
are suggestions that everything is not as perfect as it may appear. The brook
is overrun with flora, ‘half-choked’ by it, perhaps inferring that there are
conflicts and struggles within nature. The verb ‘choked’ conjures up a strong
image of suffering and death, which causes uneasiness for the reader. It is
also a very violent action that would usually be performed by human, suggesting
that pain faced by these rabbits could be down to people’s actions.
Another use
of imagery in chapter one that builds tension, is the ‘sunset’ which is ‘red in
the clouds’. The colour ‘red’ is often associated with negative emotions, such
as anger and hatred, as well as reflecting blood and death. Sunsets are also a
signal that the day is over, so much like the end of the primroses, the sunset
signifies the end of peace in the warren. All of these subtly written ‘clues’
give us a small glimpse into the future of the animals, creating suspense.
Through
dialogue, Adams creates an air of tension, with Fiver expressing a lack of
comfort in his situation, ‘You know there is something queer about the warren
this evening’. This shows us that Fiver is a very intuitive character, who is
in-tune with his surroundings. He can sense danger, but ‘can’t tell exactly
what it is’, again, providing the reader with some information, suggesting that
something is not right, but not expressing what it is; the unknown is
mysterious and worrying. Fiver also creates tension by his persona, he is
generally at unease, ‘with wide, staring eyes’, jumping at bumble-bees. His
‘staring’ eyes openly show how nervous he is, and causes other rabbits in the
warren to worry also. His nervousness causes the reader to wonder at why his
disposition is this way-is there something to be concerned about?
Tension
peaks when Fiver whimpers the horrifying line ‘the field’s full of blood’. It
is immensely distressing and echoes the image of the ‘red sunset’ from before. The
graphic description of the field being ‘full’ of blood highlights just how much
pain will occur, as ‘full’ suggests that the field cannot take anymore; the
rabbits couldn’t face any more pain than Fiver ‘sees’ happening. This forces
the reader to feel concerned for the animals, because he has prophesised a
horrific, violent event, but we still don’t know the exact details.
Adams uses
dramatic irony at the end of chapter one, because he tells us what the board
says, but the rabbits cannot read, so don’t know that their warren will soon be
destroyed for the development of houses. At this point, tension is released, as
we know the horrendous fate of the rabbits.
Discuss the use of visions and dreams in
‘Animal Farm’ and
‘Watership Down’ in the beginning of the novels.
Dreams and
visions are a vital component in the novels ‘Animal Farm’ and ‘Watership Down’,
as both George Orwell and Richard Adams highlight the journey we take when
following them, and show that not everything will go to plan.
We are
instantly confronted with Old Major’s dream in ‘Animal Farm’. This had already
been discussed between animals and anticipation is shown to be high, as animals
were ‘fluttering’ with excitement, waiting to hear it. However, Old Major puts
this highly awaited dream on hold when all of the animals have gathered. This
immediately demonstrates the control he has over the others, and the power to
manipulate is present and utilised. This manipulation triggers the reader to
question Old Major’s character, and therefore, the validity of his dream before
he has even started to discuss it.
To contrast
this, in ‘Watership Down’, Fiver is shown to be a nervous, sweet character, and
is very small (he upholds no power in the warren). His ‘wide’ eyes link to
innocence and youth, there is no part of his description that appears demanding
or controlling. He has an awful vision, of the ‘field [‘s] full of blood’, and
goes to warn the others about what he has ‘seen’. He does this with good
intentions, but is not listened to straight away, even though what he has to
say is vital to the survival of the rabbits. From this, we can infer that the
power that an individual holds impacts on the gravitas of their words, of how
their dreams are listened to; Old Major is greatly respected and can keep his
audience in suspense, whereas Fiver has very little control, so is not heard.
Although the
Old Major holds the animals under the pretence that his speech is emotive and
fairly spontaneous, we can see that it is in actual fact, well-rehearsed and
planned. Straight away, he evokes sympathy from his ‘comrades’ by expressing
the view that he believes his death is imminent. By calling the animals
‘comrades’, they are tricked into believing that they’re equal and listen
intently to the Old Major’s thoughts. He continues to tell the animals of the
farm that they have ‘miserable, laborious and short’ lives. Due to the animals’
faith in the pig’s ‘wisdom’ and his seemingly fair treatment of them, they
accept that their lives are poor, because they have been told so by a respected
character. Another way in which it is clear that the speech was prepared is the
order he speaks to collective groups, i.e. ‘He does not give milk, he does not
lay eggs…’. Firstly, he talks to the cows, then to the chickens, and so on. The
‘spontaneous’ speech that he gives is well structured and organised, like
propaganda. This shows us that the ‘dream’ that they begin to work towards is
fundamentally flawed, because it was crafted in such a way for them to believe
it.
Fiver’s
vision on the other hand, is very short, and happens to him in the moment we
are reading; he does not make anything up for effect, or rehearse it in any
way. There is an obvious sense of desperation and despair, when Fiver utters
the words ‘We’ve got to get away before it’s too late’, showing his compassion
for others, by using the collective ‘we’ve’. The evident emotion expressed by
Fiver provokes the reader to feel compassion and sympathy towards him; we
believe in his vision. Again, this reinforces our opinion that Fiver is a more
honest, trustworthy animal than the Old Major, and that Fiver’s vision is
perhaps more reliable.
However, you
can argue that the Old Major’s intentions are good, as he vocalises his wish
for ‘perfect unity, perfect comradeship’ for all animals. Although we can see
that his speech has been crafted, it’s is debatable that the sentiment behind
it is just the same. He seems to care for the animals’ welfare, and only wishes
a better life for them in the future, free of all domination, free of humans. Here
we can question whether the route of their unhappiness is humans, or whether
this is just what they have been told, but nonetheless, the dream could lead to
prosperous, happy lives for the animals. Unfortunately, as we progress through
the book, we see that the dream only leads to downfall.
This is a
major difference in ‘Watership Down’, as Fiver’s vision does come true, and a
number of rabbits live happily together, after leaving their original warren.
In Adams’ novel, we do understand that some things come at a price, because
many rabbits never make it to ‘Watership Down’, and sadly Hazel dies. This does
not tarnish the fact that Fiver was right and that they achieved a better life
for themselves. Dreams can lead to prosperity and come true. ‘Watership Down’
ends in a better position than in the beginning of the novel, whereas ‘Animal
Farm’ ends in an even worse condition than before. This could be down to the
authors’ own opinions in dreams; Orwell mocks the idea of a utopia,
highlighting the fact that it is ‘no place’, unlike Adams, who endorses the
belief of dreams and freedom.
In summary,
the authors of both novels have taken different stances on the idea of visions
and dreams, and express this in their writing. In the beginning of both books
the dream/vision is made clear to the reader and we can explore how sincere
these are. ‘Animal Farm’ casts a generally negative light on following our
dreams, as it often leads to disaster, but ‘Watership Down’ looks upon hope in
a more fond way, suggesting that although it may not be easy, we can achieve
our own idea of happiness.