Discuss the use of visions and dreams in ‘Animal Farm’ and
‘Watership Down’ at the beginning of the novels.
Both Animal Farm and Watership Down show the use of visions
and dreams.
In the very beginning of Animal Farm Old Major makes a
speech to the rest of the animals, the speech is about his dream that he has.
Old Major explains his dream and tells the animals that they should rebel
against humans and describes his dream as a world without humans. Old Major is
passing on his knowledge of how good he thinks the world would be without man.
From this point forward their vision is to rule the farm themselves. At the start
of his speech he says ‘you have heard already about the dream I had but I will
come to that later’, so from the very beginning his is holding all the animals
in anticipation and manipulating them. This tells us that their vision is being
controlled and adjusted to Old Majors dream and thoughts.
Old Major’s speech is finished with a song that he said he
had forgotten the words to until his dream the night before. He claimed that
the song was from old but the words fit with the present day. This shows that
the speech has been structured and planned carefully in order to manipulate the
other animals from the very beginning. He also uses his old age as a form of control
to make the other animals think that he is correct because he has more
knowledge. We can also see how Old Major uses control in speech when he asks a
question but then answers it himself; this shows that he gives the animals no
other option but to agree with him.
At the beginning of Watership Down Fiver is instantly
cautious and uneasy about everything. Fiver has visions of evil and danger
coming upon the warren, so from the beginning there is a vision of terror for
the rabbits. After Fiver has a bad dream in the start of chapter 2 he tells
Hazel they must go away. Fiver tells everyone that they should get to the hills
and find a home where they can all live in peace and quiet and defend
themselves from natural evils. Fivers vision is driven by fear of the unknown
whereas the vision in Animal farm is driven by Old Major’s dream.
In Animal Farm, Old Major forces the idea of rebelling
against humans whereas Fiver tries to warn the other rabbits about the risk
they are in. Fiver is trying to help the warren and has good intentions whereas
Old Major almost demands the other animals to do as he says and gets them to
agree to his idea through his use of power and control.
Dreams and visions that are driven by good intentions can be
said to be successful and achievable because in Watership Down the rabbits do
achieve their dream but at a price because Hazel dies. This suggests that
freedom and happiness isn’t free and is to be earned; this goes against what
Old Major suggested to the animals in Animal Farm because he makes it sound
like their dream for freedom will be easy to achieve. Whereas dreams and
visions that begin with evil can be successful but not fulfilling because in
Animal Farm even though they achieve the dream they always wanted, the pigs ironically
resemble humans, which are seen to be their enemies, and have all the power and
control. So their dream resulted in downfall because they are no better off
than they were in the start.
A valiant attempt was made. You clearly have good knowledge of the text but a lot of the time you just explain what happens, but the examiner will know that already. Your question was fairly well structured but your analysis wasn't that in depth. This was all really negative, sorry, there were good bits too.
ReplyDeleteI agree with whataloser (mostly) But I also think this user did not give you enough credit for your v good cross comparison of the two texts in the second to last paragraph and your good analyzing summary in the last paragraph! swag
DeleteBe careful not to retell the story at the beginning, apart from that, very good essay! swag
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you have linked the dreams to the success of the two groups. Good job :)
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